1. little devin and mel walking through park holding hands 

2. same scene but when we are older, park holding hands

3. house 1 - mel goes to slap devin - devin grabs hand and goes to punch mel.

4. house 2/park - see mel bashed up and crying on brads shoulder

5. brad proposes - hugs -

6. brad and mel walking down road - devin ses her gets mad

7. devin goes over to brad has a go at brad then drags mel off - see mel dead

8. brad takes mels wedding ring off her finger       (sad music (empathy) comes in)

Proposed final plot

Antihero/villain – starts off shot of bottles with voiceover. On phone with femme fatale.

See femme fatale seducing high class character [business man, has suit etc] ties him up [kinky sex perhaps?]

Femme fatale leaves anti-hero/villain enters

Cuts to montage of past – where kills anti-hero sister etc [1min long ish?]

Cuts back to him w/a run [polishing gun] muffled yells of tied up man [“what the fuck is this man?” Etc]

Voice over – guy angsting – history quote something like “this who cannot remember the past are condemmed to repeat it”

Cuts to black, quote fades in, hear gunshot

Film begins with a quote on black. “Freedom a man may have, he shall not have peace” Next, introductory shot of industrial buildings/his house. Voice over starts – him talking about heroes and villains. Next we have the shot of out anti-hero protagonist with alcohol bottles. He is on the phone with the femme fatal. Starts talking about how he’s paying the femme fatal to tie up/capture. Cuts to femme fatal when answering – intro shot of her high heeled boots/shoes